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It started snowing...

I looked up blankly at the gray sky. The little snowflakes wandered down gracefully on my face. I was a bit envious of them: they seemed to have a purpose, they knew what to do, and yet did it so beautifully. I forgot who I was, where I was, why I was here.... then I wondered if there even was an answer to that.

The silent night trod by, the darkness shifted to show me a few trees surrounding me and a set of swings. I walked towards it, gaining feeling back to my body, and I realized I was holding an umbrella.
"Why?" I thought, did I know it was going to snow?
"It always snows here...." came another thought outside my control, "He gave it to me...."
Putting the thoughts aside, I sat down in a swing, the creeks echoed through the night. As I swung back and forth, I remembered something- more like someone. I was waiting, that I remembered, not who or why I was waiting. I hoped for him to come, forever I waited. I waited for him to take me away, away from this lonely place. A place where time stood still, where it was constantly cold.... where only I lived....

I waited... waited for him to come....

Forever I waited....

Always waiting....
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Just re-reading this gives me chills, I kinda wonder if I really wrote this O.o

Lol so continuing on the poem/short story phase! I wrote this almost 2 years ago, and I'm pretty sure I got inspired to write this from the anime Clannad (the fantasy part, and if you've watched it, you probably could tell).

This picture is almost perfect! Just imagine it snowing and having a set of swings in there and you get the setting I thought up.

But besides the picture (from google), I really did write this, so no stealing please!
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~PandorasKaleidoscope Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that was HAUNTING
absolutely beautiful!
it gave me chills as well!
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~xMezMezx Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw tanks :iconcrazyblushplz:
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~PandorasKaleidoscope Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem! :3
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